Thread:Vae Victis/@comment-6042046-20130601074937/@comment-6042046-20130601175248


 * taps chin* Hmm... The descriptions you used are short and easy to understand for readers. I'm glad you didn't just use the default shop descriptions.

We could still refine the descriptions for the following clothing shops: Gottery the Outfitter - "Buy and sell most clothes" Dauncey's - "Buy and sell some male clothes" Fadgett & Daughters - "Buy and sell some female clothes"

I want to distinguish them further. It's not a matter of expense...but...style? Dauncey's and Fadgett's carry Persuasive, Respectable pieces. Formal wear? I don't want to use the word "uppercrust".

Let me pull out the thesaurus (in order of the ones I feel more appropriate): Lavish, luxurious, sumptuous, resplendent, deluxe, florid, posh, elegant, swanky.

Then for Gottery's: Assorted, diverse, general, motley, sundry, indiscriminate, mixed, varied, variegated.

Maybe this? Gottery the Outfitter - "Buy and sell assorted clothes" Dauncey's - "Buy and sell luxurious male clothes" Fadgett & Daughters - "Buy and sell lavish female clothes"