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Abstract: draft, rewrite, publish - the art of writing and making money.

Literary AmbitionsEdit

This is a storylet in Veilgarden. It's only listed here for completion's sake, and to avoid confusion.

This storylet shows different options (based on the Airs of London) to write something for a commission, but has nothing to do with writing Short Stories, which is what the rest of this guide is about.


The Writer's DeskEdit

The Writer's Desk generates a Short Story, which so far has (nearly) no other purpose than to improve the author's budget. The task of creating Manuscript Pages with a Potential to become a Short Story is based on Fox Persuasive. The final outcome (and thus the author's income) is based on the quality of the created manuscript.


Begin a WorkEdit

You Begin a Work and Write a Short Story. You now have Papers4small 1 x Manuscript Page with a Potential of 20.

Note: Throughout the process of creating a Short Story you can pause or step back and forth between the different stages without any penalty. But now that you are Working on... a Short Story you should not simultaneously try Shaping a Masterpiece for the Empress otherwise Something is wrong!


Typewriter

Work on your story!Edit

In fact you can move on to improve the script's Potential at Rework and Finish! when you have Papers4small 3 x Manuscript Pages, but to finish your Short Story you will need at least 10 of them.

You start with 20 Potential, which represents the script's quality and ability to become a certain Short Story. The higher your Potential the better the chance to make it a more valuable Short Story. If you let this drop to 0 your script will become a useless Wreckage!, and you have to Consign it to the flames.

With 20 Potential (and the reluctance to spend expensive items), you should have about 30-45 pages before you advance, for the editing process will consume pages until Potential hits 60. You may want to try Laudanum! in the beginning to push Potential - or burn your script if it goes awfully wrong. The use of Laudanum! later on is either not advisable or desperate.


The Writer's Desk: work on your story!
Option AP Success Failure Note
pages potential pages potential
Write. 5 +5 -1 occasionally +1 Fox 10 
Write rapidly. 4 +5 -1 occasionally +1 Fox 40 
Write frantically 4 +6 -1 occasionally +1 -2 Fox 100 
Write frenziedly 3 +6 -2 occasionally +1 -2 Fox 150 
Use Typewriter 4 +5 +1 -1 Fox 50 
Typewriter Ornate Typewriter
Use Laudanum!
(50% Luck)
3 +3 +10
(up to 100)
+1 -10 Bottleclear Laudanum
Sidebarwounds + 1 CP Wounds
Use Honey!
(60% Luck)
3 +2 +2
(up to 160)
+1 -2 Honey -50 x Honey
Nib

Rework!Edit

At an early stage of the reworking process you can either use your raw material or some specific items to increase Potential. Higher quality Short Stories require more valuable items (or a daring use of Laudanum!. Except for Touching Love Story, Favour in High Places and Trade Secret all items worth 2.50 echoes or more will also give 1-2 points of menace - even on a success.

The Writer's Desk: rework!
Option Item Cost Gain[1] Limit[2]
Quillsmall A Cautious Edit Papers4small 1 x Manuscript Page 1 (4) 25 (45)
Knife2small A Daring Edit Papers4small 1 x Manuscript Page 2 60
Heartsmall Incorporate romance Heart Romantic Notion 0.10 2 60
Gossipsmall Spice it with gossip Conversation Scrap of Incendiary Gossip 0.50 2 60
Jigsawsmall Use your Case Notes Writer Compilation of Case-Notes 2
Scaryeyesmall Add a touch of darkness Scaryeyesmall Tale of Terror!! 0.50 2 70
Papers3small Compromising Document 2 Papers3 Compromising Document 0.50 2 70
Wakesmall Include something exotic Wake Memory of Distant Shores 0.50 2 80
Blackjacksmall Incorporate life-lessons Fist 5  Hard-Earned Lesson 3 80
Waves3small Add a dash of zee-adventure! Waves3 Zee-Ztory 0.50 2 90
Implicationsmall Weave in esoteric elements Implication Extraordinary Implication 2.50 5 100
Adorationsmall Add a dash of heartbreak Adoration Touching Love Story 2.50 5 110
Masksatinsmall Not an entirely fictional character... Mask An Identity Uncovered! 2.50 5 110
Baldmansmall Ask your most exalted contacts for inside information Baldman Favour in High Places 12.50 12 140
Newgatesmall Publish... and be damned. Newgate Blackmail Material 12.50 12 150
Papers4small A rare lesson Papers4 Trade Secret 60 25
  1. Rare occasions in brackets.
  2. This is not only the potential cap, but also the difficulty level for this Persuasive challenge, which means a 60% success rate if it equals your quality.
You may go Back to writing... or finally Finish your Short Story.
Story

Finish a Short StoryEdit

Go back, if your story is Not quite ready yet... or finish it off if you have at least 10 pages with 16 Potential. Publishing is a potential challenge, consumes all created pages and might add some Making Waves. Failing degrades your story two tiers. Echoes sale price is in brackets - although not higher math, for your convenience the last column shows the value loss on a failure.

The Writer's Desk: finish a Short Story
Challenge
information
Rework
up to
Potentially Success Failure Loss
16 Papers4small 62  acceptable Story (2) Storyunloved (1)1
32 Papers4small 62  competent Storycompetent (10) Storyunloved (1)9
50 Papers4small Heart Conversation Writer 62 
Scaryeyesmall Papers3 72 
compelling Storycompelling (30) Storycompetent (10)20
70 Wake 81 
5xFist 83 
thrilling Storythrilling (50) Storycompetent (10)40
80 Waves3 92  exceptional Storyexceptional (60) Storycompelling (30)30
90 Implication 105  extraordinary Storyextraordinary(70) Storythrilling (50)20
100 Adoration Mask 115 
Baldman 152  Newgate 162 
masterful Storymasterful (80) Storyexceptional (60)20
150 Papers4 celebrated Storycelebrated (130) Storyextraordinary (70)60
200 classic Storyclassic (180) Storymasterful (80)100

Final notes:

  • Once you’ve completed your Short Story, you’re ready to start again and write another!
  • A Compelling Short Story has a real bad ratio on action points for what it's worth in the end, if you dont push your Potential with some Laudanum.
  • A failure on a A Thrilling Short Story is a real pain, so it seems advisable to rather aim for An Exceptional Short Story.
  • The optimal way to earn the most echoes and Making Waves per action with modified Persuasive 183+ is to grind Touching Love Stories in Polythreme, use Laudanum! and scrap it if it fails, then use either Write frantically or Write frenziedly if you have high enough Persuasive, then use your love stories to increase Potential to 110. Not counting the zee trips since the impact of those approaches zero as the amount of time spent overzee increases, this gives 1.73 echoes and 0.746 Making Waves per action.
  • A Celebrated Short Story is already expensive, risky and hard to achieve, but, if there's no serious need, to aim for a classic is quite insane - it requires a minimum of 2 Trade Secrets, which take 8 weeks to gather and sell for 120 echoes directly or can be converted to 250 echoes of items, whereas the Short Story goes away for 180.
  • Advance from Journalist to Author
    • This Professions needs an Storyexceptional Exceptional Short Story to advance from tier 2 to tier 3.
    • And as the card claims: "Being an Author […] pays better than Journalism" - well, at least every tier 3 profession does pay better than its tier 2 variant and this does NOT mean that Short Story authoring or anything else is being paid better to journalists.
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