Literary Ambitions
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This is a storylet in Veilgarden. It's only listed here for completion's sake, and to avoid confusion.
This storylet shows different options (based on the Airs of London) to write something for a commission, but has nothing to do with writing Short Stories, which is what the rest of this guide is about.
The Writer's Desk
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The Writer's Desk generates a Short Story, which so far has (nearly) no other purpose than to improve the author's budget. The task of creating Manuscript Pages with a Potential to become a Short Story is based on
Persuasive. The final outcome (and thus the author's income) is based on the quality of the created manuscript.
Begin a Work
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You Begin a Work and Write a Short Story. You now have
1 x Manuscript Page with a Potential of 20.
Note: Throughout the process of creating a Short Story you can pause or step back and forth between the different stages without any penalty. But now that you are Working on... a Short Story you should not simultaneously try Shaping a Masterpiece for the Empress otherwise Something is wrong!
Work on your story!
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In fact you can move on to improve the script's Potential at Rework and Finish! when you have
3 x Manuscript Pages, but to finish your Short Story you will need at least 10 of them.
You start with 20 Potential, which represents the script's quality and ability to become a certain Short Story. The higher your Potential the better the chance to make it a more valuable Short Story. If you let this drop to 0 your script will become a useless Wreckage!, and you have to Consign it to the flames.
With 20 Potential (and the reluctance to spend expensive items), you should have about 30-45 pages before you advance, for the editing process will consume pages until Potential hits 60. You may want to try Laudanum! in the beginning to push Potential - or burn your script if it goes awfully wrong. The use of Laudanum! later on is either not advisable or desperate.
| Option | AP | Success | Failure | Note | ||
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| pages | potential | pages | potential | |||
| Write. | 5 | +5 | -1 occasionally | +1 | | |
| Write rapidly. | 4 | +5 | -1 occasionally | +1 | | |
| Write frantically | 4 | +6 | -1 occasionally | +1 | -2 | |
| Write frenziedly | 3 | +6 | -2 occasionally | +1 | -2 | |
| Use Typewriter | 4 | +5 | +1 | -1 | | |
| Use Laudanum! (50% Luck) | 3 | +3 | +10 (up to 100) | +1 | -10 | |
| Use Honey! (60% Luck) | 3 | +2 | +2 (up to 160) | +1 | -2 | |
Rework!
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At an early stage of the reworking process you can either use your raw material or some specific items to increase Potential. Higher quality Short Stories require more valuable items (or a daring use of Laudanum!. Except for Touching Love Story, Favour in High Places and Trade Secret all items worth 2.50 echoes or more will also give 1-2 points of menace - even on a success.
| Option | Item | Cost | Gain[1] | Limit[2] |
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| 1 (4) | 25 (45) | |||
| 2 | 60 | |||
| | 0.10 | 2 | 60 | |
| 0.50 | 2 | 60 | ||
| 2 | ||||
| 0.50 | 2 | 70 | ||
| 0.50 | 2 | 70 | ||
| 0.50 | 2 | 80 | ||
| 3 | 80 | |||
| 0.50 | 2 | 90 | ||
| 2.50 | 5 | 100 | ||
| 2.50 | 5 | 110 | ||
| 2.50 | 5 | 110 | ||
| 12.50 | 12 | 140 | ||
| 12.50 | 12 | 150 | ||
| 60 | 25 |
- ↑ Rare occasions in brackets.
- ↑ This is not only the potential cap, but also the difficulty level for this Persuasive challenge, which means a 60% success rate if it equals your quality.
Finish a Short Story
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Go back, if your story is Not quite ready yet... or finish it off if you have at least 10 pages with 16 Potential. Publishing is a potential challenge, consumes all created pages and might add some Making Waves. Failing degrades your story two tiers. Echoes sale price is in brackets - although not higher math, for your convenience the last column shows the value loss on a failure.
| Challenge information | Rework up to | Potentially | Success | Failure | Loss |
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| 16 | acceptable | 1 | |||
| 32 | competent | 9 | |||
| 50 | compelling | 20 | |||
| 70 | 5x | thrilling | 40 | ||
| 80 | exceptional | 30 | |||
| 90 | extraordinary | 20 | |||
| 100 | | masterful | 20 | ||
| 150 | | celebrated | | 60 | |
| 200 | classic | | 100 |
Final notes:
- Once you’ve completed your Short Story, you’re ready to start again and write another!
- A Compelling Short Story has a real bad ratio on action points for what it's worth in the end, if you dont push your Potential with some Laudanum.
- A failure on a A Thrilling Short Story is a real pain, so it seems advisable to rather aim for An Exceptional Short Story.
- The optimal way to earn the most echoes and Making Waves per action with modified Persuasive 183+ is to grind Touching Love Stories in Polythreme, use Laudanum! and scrap it if it fails, then use either Write frantically or Write frenziedly if you have high enough Persuasive, then use your love stories to increase Potential to 110. Not counting the zee trips since the impact of those approaches zero as the amount of time spent overzee increases, this gives 1.73 echoes and 0.746 Making Waves per action.
- A Celebrated Short Story is already expensive, risky and hard to achieve, but, if there's no serious need, to aim for a classic is quite insane - it requires a minimum of 2 Trade Secrets, which take 8 weeks to gather and sell for 120 echoes directly or can be converted to 250 echoes of items, whereas the Short Story goes away for 180.
- Advance from Journalist to Author
- This Professions needs an
Exceptional Short Story to advance from tier 2 to tier 3.
- And as the card claims: "Being an Author […] pays better than Journalism" - well, at least every tier 3 profession does pay better than its tier 2 variant and this does NOT mean that Short Story authoring or anything else is being paid better to journalists.
- This Professions needs an